I had to change that wiring diagram slightly. The voltage drop across the relay was too great and the clutch wasn't engaging. So instead now the relay and clutch are in parallel.
The whole system is putting a pretty big load on the alternator, I'm going to change it out for a 100A to be safe.
I might also add a 10" pusher fan to the front of the condenser. I also need to potentially change the heater control valve as it seems to let a small amount of coolant by even when set to cold (checked cable adjustment already).
Finally, I need to seal up the many vast gaps around the radiator and intercooler to encourage better airflow. I'm going to buy some sheet aluminium for this, and a metal bending brake (I've wanted a sheet metal bender for ages, I'm half tempted to make my own, but they're very cheap on eBay)
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